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Breathe

A moment’s respite
As I break the surface,
Gasping for air,
For light,
For sound and sight.

But it cannot last,
This momentary pause:
The road is still long.

Take a deep breath

4 Comments

  1. Posted 15 Oct ’10 at 8:44 am | Permalink

    A powerful metaphor. striking balance. I love this.

    Thanks,
    sakkthi
    http://purplefresh.wordpress.com/

    • Posted 15 Oct ’10 at 8:49 am | Permalink

      So glad you like it. Thanks!

  2. Posted 15 Oct ’10 at 9:17 am | Permalink

    Sorry dude I pressed this in my blog without your permission.

    Below is the comment I have added in my blog
    ” A striking balance between the metaphors with simpler word choice capturing a powerful imagery. I really stunned when these lines took a turnaround with life as imagery in background, as life is yet to be explored as we travel through the lines and curves of life path.”

    http://purplefresh.wordpress.com/2010/10/15/1breathe/

    • Posted 15 Oct ’10 at 9:20 am | Permalink

      No problem. Consider permission given :-)

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